Story board: first two minutes
1. Close up of an alarm clock going off.
2. Close up and split screen of popular girl& geeky girl opening their eyes
3. Mid shot of them both sitting up in bed
4. Shot of the back of the popular girl walking to the bathroom
5. Shot of the back of geeky girl walking to the bathroom
6. Close up of popular girl cleaning teeth
7. Closeup of geeky girl cleaning teeth
We would then continue in this way, contrasting the two girls as they perform similar actions until they both arrive at school. I think we would need them to meet at this point - even if they just cross paths without acknowledging each other. I think we need to see them in the same space after all the cross-cutting.
We need to think about if and how we are going to use split screen. It makes the comparison very clear but might get repetitive if we do it too much.
We would then continue in this way, contrasting the two girls as they perform similar actions until they both arrive at school. I think we would need them to meet at this point - even if they just cross paths without acknowledging each other. I think we need to see them in the same space after all the cross-cutting.
We need to think about if and how we are going to use split screen. It makes the comparison very clear but might get repetitive if we do it too much.
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